How to write the first paragraph

Following our interesting discussion last week about writing the blurb, by a strange coincidence Waterstones announced they were displaying their books back-cover uppermost. This was to discourage people from handing the book due to the virus, but it also made a point which is useful to us. They believe the strength of the blurb itself will sell a book.

When I pick up a paperback in a bookshop, I read the blurb. If that sounds interesting, I will open the book and read the first paragraph. If I’m still standing in that bookshop ten minutes later and I’m on page 5 you can probably guarantee I’ll be buying it!

So this week the logical step for us is to share and discuss the first paragraph of a book we’re currently writing, or have written, or from a book we have read and admire. People often talk about ‘the hook’ which grabs the reader by the throat and demands to be read! This is true of pop songs too – an easily recognisable, understandable phrase. This is something that is easily remembered, and that triggers a response. It’s the response we are after. Let’s talk about what makes a great first line, and an absorbing first paragraph. See you on Friday July 3rd on Zoom! Theresa Le Flem

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Writers

Welcome to the Rugby Cafe Writers. We are a friendly group of budding and experienced writers who meet in Rugby every fortnight and share our love of books and writing. We also have a spin-off group which gives authors a chance to get feedback on their works-in-progress. We publish our own anthologies and so far have nine books for sale!

Critique Group

If you have written something and would like feedback, you might be interested in joining our Critique Group. This meets monthly. You would be expected to fully participate in the group and offer your view on the writing of others as well.